The Beginning of a 2005 Story: Laboux and Allura

Ok, ladies and gents.  I was perusing through my very old flash(jump) drive from 2005!  I was in search of a document, but I stumbled upon the beginning of a story line that I really wanted to share with the world.  Reading it now,  I suck as a writer. lol. But, hey, at least I can see where my mind was at back then.  Just another day in the life of me. :)

As their lips connect, Allura heard a faint sound, a sound that resembled a voice.  Allura, with a be-deviled look, paused.  Laboux, looking puzzled, asked her “what’s wrong?”  As the seconds roll by the voice became clearer and clearer, …it sounded like the man she was kissing, it sounded like Laboux.  “Allura!  Allura!,” it said.  “Allura, Allura, please don’t go,” the Laboux-like voice said repeatedly.  She then felt a sudden overwhelming pain to her head.  Then she felt it again, and again, and again.  She closes her eyes, madly yells, and grip her head from the sides.  Allura continued to feel this unfathomable amount of pain, as if an entity was causing a series of blows to her head.  She could not bear the pain, so it caused her to fall into the arms of Laboux.  He circumspectly raised her head with one hand, and raised Allura’s body with the other.  Laboux quickly notice a wet sensation in the palms of his hand.  An impulsive beat in his heart caused his body to turn stiff, while making him hesitant to raise his hand and look at the substance.

After a minute of stirring up enough courage to face the fear of looking at what he expected to be, he slowly raised his hand.  Laboux saw the scarlet-like liquid he thought it to be, he saw blood.  He became scared for he started to believe that she was starting to slip away from this world, and moving on to the next.  Laboux did not want Allura to die nor want her to do it without him because he had a love for her so great that matched God’s power. Laboux thought to himself useless, for he could only stand there and watch, watch and witness her slipping every second that passed.  He yells “Allura, what’s wrong, what is happening?”  At the same time, she was still being haunted by the voices that sounded like her lover.  Annoyed, and overwhelmed with pain, Allura SCREAMED, and SCREAMED!  While grabbing her arms, Laboux yells out “get a hold of yourself, calm down!”  To Allura it sounded similar to an echo for both were saying the exact same thing like two entities in a narrow hall yelling and mimicking the other.  She could not take it anymore, she wanted to get away from Laboux and the Laboux-like entity, so Allura pushed off him suddenly, at the same time making Laboux even more confused.  When she does, she trips and falls back.  As Allura falls back, it does not feel to her like how fallin should feel like, but rather laying stationary on her back.  The world that she currently thought existed slowly evaporated before her eyes, like reassured eyes realizing that what is being seen in the desert is nothing but a mirage.  The pain is still there, but feels faint.  Allura begins to open her eyes at a snail’s pace, and then layed there awestruck because of what she was seeing.  Everything was pitch black, everything …..was fading into the black.

Laboux and Allura's Chrysanthemum

Laboux and Allura's Chrysanthemum

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